His Accidental Christmas Omega: Ava Beringer

3stars

I couldn't really get into this book. It read like I should know things that I just didn't already know. The title lead me to believe it was a part of a world but not a next in series if that makes sense. Basically, a stand-alone set in the same town or place as previous books. But I spent a good bit of time wondering if one character had died in a fire and the importance of the agents going to this house full of so many characters who only pop up again at the end of the story whos names I don't remember. I read that entire scene like what is the importance of this?

Operation Gay freedom, Noah Harris

3stars

So initially I was hyped for this story. A nice action pact story with a splash of paranormal and sprinkled with a side plot of romance. Honestly what's not to love. On a technical level at the beginning of the novel transitions were awkward. We'd be at one scene and then some sentence like 'now they were..." and I'd be like when did they start moving, weren't they just... how did... and so on. As the novel went on the transitions got much smoother so this turned into a fleeting issue but it stood out because it was at the beginning of the book.

How To Vex A Vampire

This was an okay book. It started off well but as I kept on reading it became more about just finding out what was going on then actually digging deep into the characters. 

Finn starts out alright. I'm here for the snark. I only picked this book up because I liked 'happy endings' so much. The problem here was that it wasn't always funny. Sometimes it just seemed unnecessary. And the secret that Finn was keeping about why he wanted to join the vampire unit never set well with me. I couldn't help agreeing with everyone that he could get killed. 

Safe In His Arms

This was a safe read. Very low angst, easy to get into. No real problems. It losses a star though for one big technical issue from me. Rome vs Roman. The book starts off in the first paragraph saying "Roman was". The very next paragraph says "Rome looked". I thought there were two different people. It didn't end there. It goes on to introduce the pack members, cousins brothers and even his twin with whom he is only ten minutes older. With all these names and the consistent changing from Rome to Roman, I'd be lying if I said I wasn't lost, confused, and a bit annoyed.

In all fairness, I've seen this done before. Hell, I've done it. So it isn't the fact that both names are interchanged in the narrative it's the placement. Something about it jarred me. Maybe it was that I wasn't set up for this. It happened so fast. First word first paragraph, which was really short, had one name. The second had another name as the first word but I wasn't told his name was Roman but his friends call him Rome. There wasn't a dialogue section where they called him Rome after setting the reader up with the name Roman. Can't really place it but I was confused by it in this novel for some reason.

Corruption: A Bureau Story Book 1

This was a short sweet story. But for something that I was expecting to be a romance, even possibly with a little BDSM. It didn't deliver. Unfortunately, the book wasn't tight enough to read like a short story. It actually gave me the feeling of the beginning of a full-length novel. I knew this wasn't going to be happening having read the blurb for the next two novels before buying this one.

Jumping between marks and audience really threw me off in the first chapter. Especially when marks is more commonly used for say a hit in assassination stories or the person one is following in an espionage type novel. In this case, they were audience members at a carnival. What they most accurately were was customers. Marks was odd and the inability to stick to audience or marks added to the oddity of it.

Loving Luke

As a whole, this book seemed like I'd love it. A nice hokey romance that starts in the midst of a problem instead of dragging you through the problem. It didn't quite lift off the page for me though.

Firstly I'd like to point out I had zero problems with the book starting after a major event. Luke made a bet. Harley found out about it and now he needs to fix the mess he made. My problem with it was how long it took to mention the parameters of the bet. Like the full details didn't drop until his apology which is way down past 70percent. Secondly, most importantly, how the hell did Harley find out? Not detailing the scene fine, but not expressing the specifics of the bet and how Harley found out was what made it hard to get into. 

Going Down

I enjoyed reading this. Glad to finally say that considering my last couple of reviews. This book did have a few errors but I didn't pause while reading it which is good. There was the use of the word bowels that took me out of the story a bit. But beyond that, I enjoyed reading this.

The technical thing that stood out the most was after a night of being too drunk to immediately remember a party it takes a few days to remember the party and another few to remember the guy who saved him from the morning hangover that same night with a hangover remedy. I assumed just over a week might have gone by so a week is doable but the author says they were talking more. They hadn't talked in a week so the saying when they next met they were talking more seems like they had been talking already.